yea boi yeaThis saddens me; constructive critique (instead of 'oh it's purdy' which is what dA seems to be often!) is really important for artistic growth. Plus, I need to know which version to go with before I can start the next page. ARGH.
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Equilibrium Comic i1p1 Alt.Equilibrium, Issue #1 - avantguarde/CarrieEquilibrium Comic i1p1 Alt.
This probably gives superior planet background, but less character background. Not so much in media res.
ALT. PAGE ONE (six panels)
Panel 1. A view of the Earth, pre-catastrophe. This can either be a town/village setting, or a zoomed out view. If zoomed out, it should appear lush and green.
CAP/ADELENE: Stories say Eirt was a prosperous place. Full of industry, peace. Flora and Fauna.
Panel 2. Earth, again. A massive disaster has struck, making everywhere virtually unlivable. Depending on the view, we should either see people dead in th
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Equilibrium Comic i1p1 ScriptEquilibrium, Issue #1 - avantguarde/CarrieEquilibrium Comic i1p1 Script
PAGE ONE (five panels)
Panel 1. A view of a village, in the distance, at midday. It is a post-post apocalyptic village, based around a small oasis. There is a deficit of shade surrounding the village, and no palm trees. Nobody is outside; the sun swelters from above.
CAP/ADELENE: I’ll start at the very beginning.
Panel 2. Inside of one of the houses. There’s very little wood inside of it. It’s more a shack comprised of some metal -- heavily rusted -- walls, and sand-colored fabric. Two figures are huddling around an ancient look
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and i am on DA
therefore
i will buy me pants on DA
i have no idea what this comment is about anymore. am i not wearing pants somewhere on DA? must i shop on DA to procure pants?
it is a mystery!!!! (???)
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